It holds me,
But it cannot contain me
It touches me,
But I will never feel it
My heart will pound,
But never fast enough
It shows around me,
Yet I fell no a thing
It is always around me,
From the darkest places of misery,
To the bottom of a very twisted heart.
Reihaneh on 21 May, 2020
It is really good
Purple slug on 4 January, 2019
Grace on 11 October, 2018
WOOOOW!!! That was amazing! (I am also called Grace!)
Annya on 4 January, 2016Wow! nice poem. Is it trying to scare me?
Emma on 4 January, 2016I like the tone of the poem. I wonder what the poem is about? Are you trying to describe darkness? It is a nice poem.
Ashley on 23 August,2015 on 23 August, 2015WOW!!!!! That was amazing I'm sure that one day you will be an amazing writer
ALH on 10 February, 2015I loved your poem, usually I don't like poetry that much, but yours was great!
grace on 23 November, 2014that was amazing am gonna use it for school. thx xx
Ella Rose on 6 November, 2014I want to read that again! It was amazing!
Karsen the Dragon Rider on 25 September, 2014Aww pretty poem heres another about fear Fear raises hair its hard to bear just close your eyes to arise in the morning
Kellie on 3 June, 2014Beautiful!!!
Hannah Begley on 21 May, 2014This is one of the best poems I have ever read.Very descriptive, and sad. But aren't the saddest stories or poems the most beautiful? I love it.
Lucy on 16 March, 2014Wow! This is a great poem
Crystal Gomes on 29 October, 2013The poem touched the bottom of my heart>>>>
hampton on 14 October, 2013I am pretty much speechless, that was incredible
Kara on 25 September, 2013WOW!! Only One Word: excellent!! DD