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It holds me,

But it cannot contain me

It touches me,

But I will never feel it

My heart will pound,

But never fast enough

It shows around me,

Yet I fell no a thing

It is always around me,

From the darkest places of misery,

To the bottom of a very twisted heart.


Reihaneh on 21 May, 2020

It is really good

Purple slug on 4 January, 2019


Grace on 11 October, 2018

WOOOOW!!! That was amazing! (I am also called Grace!)

Annya on 4 January, 2016

Wow! nice poem. Is it trying to scare me?

Emma on 4 January, 2016

I like the tone of the poem. I wonder what the poem is about? Are you trying to describe darkness? It is a nice poem.

Ashley on 23 August,2015 on 23 August, 2015

WOW!!!!! That was amazing I'm sure that one day you will be an amazing writer

ALH on 10 February, 2015

I loved your poem, usually I don't like poetry that much, but yours was great!

grace on 23 November, 2014

that was amazing am gonna use it for school. thx xx

Ella Rose on 6 November, 2014

I want to read that again! It was amazing!

Karsen the Dragon Rider on 25 September, 2014

Aww pretty poem heres another about fear Fear raises hair its hard to bear just close your eyes to arise in the morning

Kellie on 3 June, 2014


Hannah Begley on 21 May, 2014

This is one of the best poems I have ever read.Very descriptive, and sad. But aren't the saddest stories or poems the most beautiful? I love it.

Lucy on 16 March, 2014

Wow! This is a great poem

Crystal Gomes on 29 October, 2013

The poem touched the bottom of my heart>>>>

hampton on 14 October, 2013

I am pretty much speechless, that was incredible

Kara on 25 September, 2013

WOW!! Only One Word: excellent!! DD